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Illustration . Martin Grohs . 2013

"Beauty is transitory."

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© Martin Grohs. All rights reserved.
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:iconjacklavy:
First of all, very good job! I had to really look hard to find something wrong with it.

The only thing I've noticed that you probably didnt consider well enough, is the light sources reflecting on the face/hair.

on the face its clearly coming from the left, on the body its from both sides.

On the hair (the part covering the face) is kind of all together which is kinda wrong if you were going for realistic lighting.
The 3 left hair cluster reflect as if the light is from the right, and the other side is mirrored, that's kinda wrong I guess.. and theres a white underglow beneath one hair cluster which looks kinda weird..

Other than that, It's an amazing work!
very good!
keep it up!

I hope I did not offend you with this critique, I mean only to help you :)
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mks-7zdesigns May 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Loved it from conception!
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grohsARTig May 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you mate!
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Bojan1558 Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wonderful!
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grohsARTig Apr 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thanks a lot!
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:iconfoolsightblind:
great concept and image !
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grohsARTig Feb 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :)
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:iconjvgce:
creative composition & very nice drawing~~~
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grohsARTig Jan 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you very much!!
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Chrisma60 Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is amazing!!! Very good work!
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